Wednesday, May 18, 2011

How could I improve my blog?

3 comments:

  1. You did really well on your blog and I cant think of anything to improve on, good job. I also think that you should have more pictures.

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  2. You could have added some more voice to each paragraph. Try to make your paragraphs longer because they weren't detailed enough. . .

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  3. Your blog is good but, i also think you should have had longer paragraphs.

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