You did really well on your blog and I cant think of anything to improve on, good job. I also think that you should have more pictures.
You could have added some more voice to each paragraph. Try to make your paragraphs longer because they weren't detailed enough. . .
Your blog is good but, i also think you should have had longer paragraphs.
You did really well on your blog and I cant think of anything to improve on, good job. I also think that you should have more pictures.
ReplyDeleteYou could have added some more voice to each paragraph. Try to make your paragraphs longer because they weren't detailed enough. . .
ReplyDeleteYour blog is good but, i also think you should have had longer paragraphs.
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